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Post by Ali Wolf on Jan 7, 2007 1:37:18 GMT -5
Supposedly my vacation was not in vain; for I did a bit of writing on the airplane returning home, and here's what I came up with.
Air Thoughts
Riding high up in the black air, I press my nose up against a frosty window and watch metal wings kiss the sky. The city lights dot the dark velvet below. I want to paint the vision so all can see, and have each light of red, blue, yellow, represent a soul down there; but no paint can twinkle and shine like this. The only copy of this beautiful sight is the space which surrounds the above. Each vast star in the sky is a city light in itself. Far down below lies the world in sleep. But is it truly sleeping? Though the night shows nay a sign of thinning, I cannot fully say the city's eyes are closed. Surely there must be a mind out there such as mine; always open, always thinking. But no matter how long a time I stare down at these beautiful specks of light, the only change is a hazy mist which blocks my view.
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Caty
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Post by Caty on Jan 7, 2007 5:55:13 GMT -5
Oooh. I'm not deep enough to write something like that =P The only thing I can think of that I have ever written that was like, "Wow" was this paragraph I did for this Creative Writing Workshop with an author (Jenny Nimmo- Welsh author.) audition about a sort of diary entry about how a friend and I went out one night where we weren't supposed to go and she died some way or another. It evolved whilst I was writing it and when I read it back I was completely shocked at how good it sounded. They must of thought I was severly depressed or something when they read it =P I got accepted though! Which was good. Heh.
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Post by Ali Wolf on Jan 7, 2007 19:58:37 GMT -5
Lol! Severely depressed is the best sort of writing ^^. Though, some how I managed to not mention death once while I was writng this, though I was thinking about it. I'm pretty sure my creative writing teacher thought I was mentally messed up or something like that, because almost all of my stories contained someone dieing, crying, severely physically or mentally scarred, or going to prison. Then one day she even asked me if I was blah blah blah and I had to reasure her that I would not bring a gun to school or anything^^! It was all because of a little doodle I did when I was deathly bored which happen to contain a gun. Anyhoo, I hate her^-^. But, unfortunatly, I'll have to take her again for advanced creative writing, that'll be fun .
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